Take Two on BeMyDD 1st paragraph

Old paragraph:

With Miami’s world-renowned nightlife it’s easy to lose track of time and have one too many drinks. What happens when you and your group have downed more martinis than you can handle and are now left without a designated driver?

BeMyDD steps in.

 

New version:

Michael Barrios had plenty of reason to celebrate last week. The 24-year-old was hired by the Miami Dade Police Department two days after he became engaged to his girlfriend of 4 years. He wanted to be able to enjoy a night out with his closest family and friends where they could have a great time and acknowledge all the good news of the week. He didn’t want to limit his fun but he also didn’t want to blow his new career over a few drinks. That’s when he decided to call BeMyDD, Miami’s latest and most convenient designated driver service.

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